Read carefully the following excerpt on criminal charges on gaokao cheaters, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 wo

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问题     Read carefully the following excerpt on criminal charges on gaokao cheaters, and then write your response in NO LESS THAN 200 words, in which you should:
    . summarize the main message of the excerpt, and then
    . comment on how to prevent cheating in gaokao effectively.
    You can support yourself with information from the excerpt.
    Marks will be awarded for content relevance, content sufficiency, organization and language quality. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
                                Gaokao Cheaters to Face Criminal Charges
    Educational authorities believe that by dangling the prospect of a harsh punishment in front of the test-takers, it will safeguard the fairness of the tests, widely seen as an important part of social justice, analysts said.
    The ministries of education (MOE) and public security (MPS) have repeatedly urged local authorities to combat gaokao-related crimes, with over 170 suspects arrested and over 6 000 pieces of illegal information, both online and from other sources, having been dealt with. This includes advertisements selling answers and cheating equipment. A national campaign has also been launched to crack down on the sale of wireless devices for cheating, unauthorized gaokao content online and substitute exam sitters.
    Products and devices to aid in cheating have become increasingly sophisticated, ranging from watches, headphones and T-shirts with receivers to equipment usually used for spying. The industry makes huge profits, news site thepaper. en reported, based on 84 court rulings in cases of gaokao cheating from 2015 to 2020.
    Gaokao cheating has evolved from an individual practice to an organized criminal enterprise in recent years, which involves both teachers and test organizers. This severely affects the chance for students to have an equal shot at education resources, Lao Kaisheng, an education expert at Beijing Normal University told the Global Times.
    "Safeguarding fairness in gaokao and education in general is the baseline for China to maintain social justice," said Xiong Bingqi, vice president of the 21st Century Education Research Institute in Beijing.

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答案 It’s High Time to Deal with Cheating in Gaokao With the increasing sophistication of the aiding devices and involvement of organized enterprises in gaokao-related crimes, to safeguard fairness and maintain social justice, a harsh punishment is urgently called for. In my opinion, deep introspection of this issue reveals the actual foe behind this fiercely competitive scene. If not severely combated, crimes of this kind are doomed to make a notorious comeback. To begin with, in a country where supremacy is attached more to scores that are manifested within a few hours than one’s aptitude and integrity, those who are either slack or desperate would take a risk of cheating in gaokao as the last straw. In pursuit of a once-and-for-all shot which determines an important phase of life, some, equipped with smart devices, dare risk cheating in the exam. Moreover, the ill-designed gaokao system fans the fire of bold deceit in gaokao. As mentioned, if one single exam continues to determine a person’s whole life, this shameless crime may claw its way back. So both the structure and content of gaokao should be adjusted so that cheating in gaokao can be curbed beforehand. Firstly, moral lessons should be instilled into the potential candidates of cheaters again and again. For those who dare take the risk, both the cheaters and those involved should face a severe punishment. Secondly, several exams and interviews should be required, coupled with a person’s previous record in academic and moral achievement. With these implemented, hopefully, charging cheaters legally will be our last resort. In conclusion, instead of being our best option, a severe punishment is nothing but hindsight. Sentencing an exam-cheater to the jail may well be a powerful pesticide to this infestation, but moral lessons and structural alteration should also be given for the prevention of cheating in gaokao.

解析     本题讨论如何有效地解决高考作弊这一话题。选段中首先摆明了政府推行针对高考作弊者实施刑罚的态度,然后分析了采取此措施的原因,即当前高考作弊已经产业化并使用有组织的高科技手段。选段最后强调为了保证社会公正,将高考作弊入刑将是行之有效的解决手段。此题的写作重点在于:首先概括上述选段重点,其次针对高考作弊者是否应该入刑提出自己的观点并进行论述。
    开头部分首先概括选段中的重点,然后指出导致高考作弊的元凶,并阐明其危害。
    中间部分首先指出正因为国家把对学生的培养和选拔放在一次性的考试——高考之上。才导致了平时懒惰或绝望的考生在考试时孤注一掷,采取各种手段进行作弊。其次,存在严重弊端的现行高考制度让作弊者有机可乘,从而铤而走险。接着分别论述解决上述两个问题的措施与途径。
    结尾部分首先指出将高考作弊者入刑并非最佳选择,接着指出解决此问题的关键在于防患于未然。
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