Greenhouse Flowers Can’t Stand the Wind and Rain Study the drawings carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words. You shoul

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问题     Greenhouse Flowers Can’t Stand the Wind and Rain
    Study the drawings carefully and write an essay of 160-200 words. You should
    1) describe the drawings, interpret its meaning, and
    2) point out its implications in our life.
   

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答案 The set of pictures above vividly describes the destiny of a flower in two different conditions. When it is put in a greenhouse, which shelters it from the heavy rain, the flower has an excellent blossom. However, once it is removed out of the greenhouse, it withers with its petals falling around. It is obvious that a flower grown and kept in a greenhouse can hardly withstand the test of harsh conditions. These pictures symbolically point out that children under the full protection of their parents may have difficulty living on themselves. Spoiled by their parents, children can never have a chance to learn what hardship means, not to say to face the challenge of life on their own. No wonder when they begin to seek independence in the real world, they will soon be disappointed and disoriented. Therefore, I believe the parents should change their view on family education. The role of parents should never act as a lifelong protector of their children. They should do whatever they can to help their children build up a sense of duty and independence before it is too late. For example, they can teach them how to make decisions and how to make efforts to gain what they want. Then, the children can face up to the possible difficulty or challenge and reach achievements when they grow up.

解析     这两幅图片对比鲜明。画意一目了然:温室花朵经不起风雨的考验。我们可将文章的主题定为孩子不应总在父母的庇护下,成为经不起生活磨难的温室花朵,而应及早自立。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:
    第一段客观描述图片,尤其注意两幅图片的不同之处。
    第二段揭示图片寓意,说明在父母的宠爱下,孩子往往不能独立面对挫折,无法接受残酷的社会现实,面对困难束手无策。
    第三段指出家长必须转变教育观念,不能永远做孩子的保护伞。只有尽早培养孩子的独立能力,才能让孩子长大成人、走向成功。
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