For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? You sho

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below:
    1.现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班
    2.对这种做法有人表示支持,也有人并不赞成
    3.我认为……

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答案 Should Parents Send Their Kids to Art Classes? Today, it is widely acknowledged that children should receive an all-round education. Therefore, many parents send their children to art classes to improve their self-cultivation. As a result, classes like calligraphy, music and dance training begin to thrive. However, as for this phenomenon, opinions vary from person to person. Some parents insist that children should learn something else besides the compulsory courses. They say it is beneficial for children to develop the ability which is associated with their success. However, many other parents do not agree. They hold that the subjects learnt at school are already heavy burdens for the children, so it is cruel to send them to art classes on weekends. There are a lot of important figures who have achieved great success with little education, not to speak of art training. From my perspective, it is not sensible for parents to send their children to art classes. On the one hand, parents always blame their children for getting low marks, but on the other hand, they send their kids to art classes which occupy a lot of their time so that they have little time to review what they have learnt at school. What’s more, some children are forced to attend art classes, which makes it impossible for them to develop any other interest.

解析     第一段简要说明许多家长送孩子参加各:种艺术班的现象,并指出对此现象人们有不同的观点。
    第二段分别阐述了两种不同的观点。有的家长对这种现象表示理解和支持,因为送孩子参加艺术班是为了开发孩子的各种能力,培养特长,这与孩子未来的成功和幸福密切相关;另外一些家长则持反对观点,他们认为这会给孩子带来过重的负担。末句中There are a lot of importantfigures who have achieved great success with little education,在There be句型中套用了who引导的定语从句,为文中亮点句型之一。
    第三段阐述自己的观点,即盲目送孩子参加艺术班是不明智的。第二句用but将on the onehand…on the other hand...句型连接起来,成为一个长的复合句,为文章增色不少。
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