Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Buying and Selling Stocks as a Student. Yo

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Buying and Selling Stocks as a Student. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 在校大学生炒股的现象在一些地主很普遍
2. 有人认为这种行为不利于学生的学习也有人认为这种行为也能让学生有所收获
3. 你的观点
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答案 Buying and Selling Stocks as a Student At present, there are many students engaged in buying and selling stocks. Some of them are equipped with updated device so as to get the latest information and seize golden chance

解析 [写作点拨]
    ①审题及布局。这篇作文是讨沦大学生炒股这一热点问题。在布局上,可以根据提纲进行三段式写作。根据提纲,我们可以把第二点作为文章的重点段落,运用总——分的段落模式进行写作:同时把第一点和第三点作为略写段落。第一段简要地说明这种现象普遍存在即可。第二段可以用一个主题句,表明不同的人对此有不同的看法,并说明原因。第三段阐述自己的观点,可以是赞同其中之一,也可以是自己独特的见解。②语言。在用词上,争取用不同方式表达相同的意义。多样化的表达方式使文章显得生动、流畅,如对买卖股票的相关表达。
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