Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1. describe the drawing briefly,

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问题     Write an essay of 160 -200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should
    1. describe the drawing briefly,
    2. explain its intended meaning, and then
    3. support your view with an example/examples.
    You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

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答案 The cartoon presents a ridiculous confrontation between a goalkeeper and a ball player. As can clearly be seen, both sides exaggerate the power of the opposite, with the ball player thinking the goalkeeper is so huge that his chance of scoring is slim and the goalkeeper thinking the goal is too big for him to save. Under overwhelming pressure, self-confidence, no doubt, turns its back upon the two men. What the picture conveys is that people tend to underrate themselves while tackling tough tasks, just like the two men in the cartoon. However, we now live in a world full of difficulties and challenges, and the lack of confidence may block our way forward. Firstly, we will be engulfed by fear and worry, thereby standing in the dark. Secondly, chances of winning may pass us by due to the lack of confidence. Consequently, to grab success, we must believe in ourselves. My point can be well exemplified by the following example of Helen Keller. Although tortured by disease, Helen, a deaf-blind person, earned a bachelor’s degree and published 12 books. She once said, "Optimism is the faith that leads to achievement. Nothing can be done without hope and confidence. " This case unveils a simple but significant truth: confidence is an indispensable key to success. So be courageous and knock down the enemy within yourself.

解析     图画为我们展示了足球场上非常重要的一幕——点球大战。有趣的是,在这一关键时刻,球员眼中的守门员变得异常高大,球门变得十分狭小,觉得进球无望;反之,守门员则认为球门奇大无比,自己身材渺小,防守困难重重。显然,双方队员在重压之下均丧失了信心,很可能因此而错失了得分的最佳时机。图画意图明显,即从反面说明了自信的重要性。考生在写作中既可以延续图画思路,从反面论述缺乏自信的消极影响,也可以从正面论述树立自信的积极意义。
    第一段:描述图画。指出双方队员皆因缺乏自信而高估了对手,低估了自己。
    第二段:揭示寓意。首先点出图画主题,然后分析缺乏自信会引发怎样的后果,譬如受困于黑暗之中、与成功擦肩而过等。
    第三段:举例说明,充实论据。最好选用中外较为有名且具有代表性的人物实例。举例不宜过多,一到两个即可。
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