Chinese students’ physical condition is in decline, such as low vital capacity, overweight, myopia, etc. , according to the repo

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问题     Chinese students’ physical condition is in decline, such as low vital capacity, overweight, myopia, etc. , according to the report on students’ physical quality and health surveillance recently released by the Ministry of Education.
    Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic:
    On Chinese Students’ Declining Physical Quality

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答案 On Chinese Students’ Declining Physical Quality Nowadays, Chinese students’ poor physical condition has attracted public attention. Thus it becomes extremely urgent for our society to solve this problem. Personally, I believe the cooperation of school and family is the only effective way to solve this problem. For one thing, schools should make an amendment to their present school curriculum. For middle school students in China, their sole task is to study hard and make progress every day. This may not be a wrong thing actually, but it is not necessarily the only objective of schooling. Many schools even cancel music and PE lessons so as to spare more time for students to "study". Teachers assign a lot of homework every day and finally spoil students not only mentally but also physically. Nobody can always maintain a healthy physical condition under long-time pressure, let alone young kids. One more important reason is that parents are usually the people who should be responsible for such kind of consequence. In order to make their children different from others, Chinese parents often rule their sons and daughters with a ruthless iron hand. Their only goal is to nurture an outstanding person of the family, without caring about the physical condition of their children. To sum up, schools and parents are responsible for this problem, and both sides should adopt the new concept of quality-oriented education, rather than focusing on scores only. Only in this way can the poor health condition of Chinese students be improved.

解析     本题讨论中国学生身体素质下降这一社会问题。考生可从学校、家庭和个人等方面进行论述,提出具体的解决办法;也可重点选择其中两到三点说明造成这一问题的原因并提出解决办法。
    思路1:从学校和家庭两方面分析原因并提出具体的解决办法。
    一方面,学校单纯追求升学率,只看重学生的文化课成绩、不重视体育锻炼的现象仍然普遍存在,多数学校在体育师资和体育设施上没有完善配备,因此学校应对现行的课程设置进行修订;另一方面,家长望子成龙心切,在本已繁重的学校课程外给孩子报各种、各样的辅导班,孩子的课余时间被剥夺得所剩无几,几乎没有闲暇进行体育锻炼,因此家长应关注学生身体素质的提高。
    思路2:主要分析造成中国学生身体素质下降的原因。
    国家在进行目标考核时,用考分来评价学校、教师和学生,素质教育贯彻乏力,应试教育的观念依旧强烈,由此造成学生没有时间进行体育锻炼;另外,随着互联网的发展,学生容易沉溺于电脑游戏及各种社交网络而不愿进行体育锻炼。
    范文选取了思路1,从学校和家庭两方面分析原因并提出具体的解决办法,并发出呼吁。
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