• Your department needs to employ some temporary staff. • Write an email to the Human Resources Manager: • saying how many sta

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问题 • Your department needs to employ some temporary staff.
• Write an email to the Human Resources Manager:
  • saying how many staff you need and giving the date you want them to start
  • explaining why you need them
  • stating what skills they should have.
• Write 40-50 words,

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答案Sample A As you know, we always have increasing number of orders before Christmas. I need to hire 3 people for two weeks for packaging. I don’t require any specific skills. I need them by the end of the next week at latest. Regards. Anja Vinogradova Band 5 All the content points are covered and there is evidence of a wide range of vocabulary and good language control. The email is clear and concise and the register is appropriate. Sample B To: Human Resources Manager From: Cao Hui As the company’s expanding sales, you know it is not enough for 5 people in our department. We need 10 temporary staff to finish the more and more deal in our department. I wish the new staff has the "office", "oracle" skills and basic English skills. We prefer to the experices people. If they can come to work by the next month, it is very find. Thank you. Band 2 Whilst all the content points have been addressed, the message is not clearly conveyed due to the frequent errors which distract the reader. At times, the register of the email is not entirely appropriate.

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