Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then inter

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问题     Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)
   

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答案 As is shown in the picture, there are four siblings: three sons and one daughter in the four corners of the picture, each keeping a goal net seriously as goalkeeper. Their old father crouches like a football and rolls all about on the ground, being kicked around by his children. This picture indicates the current deteriorating old-caring circumstance: many grown-up children refuse to provide for their aged parents, regarding them as heavy burdens; those miserable senior citizens have no strength to fight for their rights and benefits, only to be maltreated by their children that have been raised by their own hands and sweats. This picture is thought-provoking to me. I feel sorry for those parents who have spent half of their lives breeding their children but at last become the deserted. People should reflect on this issue and on what has happened to our ethical values including the traditional filial duty. We should enhance our education on the traditional virtue and fight against the morbid social backdrop. It’s time that our traditional value should be restored and the senior citizens be taken good care of.

解析     本文结构清晰,表达连贯。首段采用先人物后背景的顺序描写了图画的主要信息。第二段揭示了图画的主旨,论述了图画反映的社会问题。第三段用居里夫人发现镭和农村改革的两个具体事例层层展开论证,清晰严谨。全文主题思想鲜明,准确达意,词汇量丰富。
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