Last month, China Daily launched a reader poll in which 2 000 university students were asked about their ideal career standards.

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问题    Last month, China Daily launched a reader poll in which 2 000 university students were asked about their ideal career standards. The following bar chart is the result. Study the bar chart carefully and write an essay in which you should:
(1) describe tile bar chart,
(2)state the meaning, and
(3)put forward your own view.
You should write about 120 words.

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答案 As is revealed in the bar chart above, steadiness, high salary and self-development are viewed as the most important career standards by most university students. The implied meaning conveyed in it can be briefly stated in the following two aspects. To begin with, the spirit of challenge is missing among most university students. Their top career standard -- steadiness -- shows that most students lack the confidence and courage to face difficulties and challenges in work What’s more, most students are money-oriented and self-centered. High income and self- development are viewed as the most important factors, which indicates a lacking of the spirit of serving the people and rewarding the society. In my view, their employment ideal needs to be adjusted. On the one hand, a widespread education campaign must be launched to popularize correct employment concepts. On the other hand, a healthy social environment should be created so as to guide the healthy development of students’ character. Only in these ways can university students, find their ideal jobs in our harmonious society.

解析    (ⅰ)这是结合图表和提纲的写作,应当综合图表与提纲式作文两种题型的写作方法来进行。
   (ⅱ)在描述图表时应抓住主要信息和典型数据,重点说明变化趋势及理由;可以采用比较、对照等方法来对比分析图表的数据和信息,准确找出它们之间的变化和区别,归纳出总体变化趋势。
   (ⅲ)应根据题目所给提纲先写出每一段落的主题句,然后结合对图表的解读扩展成段,再完成全文。
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