You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three Lon

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问题 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The line graph below gives information about the number of visitors to three London museums between June and September 2016.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.

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答案The line graph compares how many people visited the three London museums in the summer of 2016. As is presented in the given data, British Museum was the most popular museum in terms of visits and there were some fluctuations on the number of visitors for the given four months. British Museum was the most visited museum in London in 2016, and in June, around 600,000 people visited this museum. In the same period, there were around 550,000 visitors in the Natural History Museum whereas 400,000 visitors went to the Science Museum. In the next month, the visitors of British museum increased to 750,000, reaching at the highest point, while the visitors of the other two museums decreased. With some fluctuations in the next two months, the number of the British Museum goers reached to over 650,000 in September. By contrast, the number of other two museums also started rising, reaching around 450,000.

解析 图表为三线图,描述了三家博物馆在2016年6到9月的参观人数(需注意,参观人数的单位是thousands)。本文的行文思路可以是以线为单位进行描述,即一线一段,也可以以月份为单位,分别描述每月各博物馆的参观人数。范文采用了后一种思路。图表描述数据均为过去的时间,时态上应该用一般过去时。
从总体来看,三个博物馆的人数在这几个月均有变化,且British Museum的波动最为明显,且该博物馆参观人数最多,与其他两个博物馆的变化有明显区别。而另外两个博物馆的变化趋势较为相似,考生可考虑合并来写。
描述具体数据时,注意几个极值,British Museum的最高值在7月,最低值在8月。Natural History Museum的最低值在7月左右,Science Museum的最低值在8月,两者的最高值分别在6月和9月。
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