Read this letter which you have had from the Chairman of Mercy Automotive. Mercy Automotive Dear Mr. Ding, I am pleased to tell

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问题 Read this letter which you have had from the Chairman of Mercy Automotive.
Mercy Automotive
Dear Mr. Ding,
I am pleased to tell you that we would like to offer you the post of Branch Manager of our company in Saint Paolo. The position is as important as your present job, but, because the Saint Paolo branch is larger, we will give you a 12% increase in salary, and other benefits.
Your new job will start at the beginning of October.
Please let me know if you have any questions.
Mercy Tim,
Chairman
You want the job, but there are some problems. Write a reply:
thanking him for the offer.
giving a reason why you cannot start until November.
asking for a bigger increase in salary.
requesting details about the other benefits.
Write 60-80 words.

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答案Dear Mr. Tim, Thank you for your offer of making me the Manager of the branch in Saint Paolo. I would be delighted to accept the job. Unfortunately I have a business trip in October and I cannot start the job until November. I think I ought to get a 15% increase in salary, because the new branch is much farther. I would be grateful if you could also let me know about the other benefits. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely, Yu Ding

解析 本文是对商务信件的考查,内容要求是根据Mercy Automotive主席关于提供工作机会的来信进行回复。自己想得到这份工作,但还有一些问题。内容方面,主要有:感谢他所提供的工作机会,解释不能及时上班的原因,薪酬方面还需要提高,请求其他的福利待遇。文章的格式要按照商务信函的格式要求,因是属于感谢信,并带有其他的要求和请求,所以语言要委婉,要礼貌得体。
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