[A] Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words. [B] Your essay must be written clear

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问题     [A] Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words.
    [B] Your essay must be written clearly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)
    [C] Your essay should meet the requirements below:
    1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon.
    2. Give your comments.
   

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答案 Whoever sees this cartoon can’t help laughing. How funny it is—A hen is holding a notice promising that her eggs would be round and surely would contain everything a normal egg contains. But at second thought, it is anything but funny because the picture reveals a prevalent phenomenon in our society: many of these promises are meaningless since the promise provided is nothing but the normal responsibility of the promise maker. Odd and funny as they sound, such promises are so prevalent that we cannot afford to ignore them. For example, administration departments assure to perform their tasks effectively and fairly without taking any bribery. As a matter of fact, these cannot be called promises at all, since they are no more than their normal duties and obligations. I dare say these empty promises are causing great damage to our society both materially and morally. As the old saying goes, "Honesty is the best policy". People engaged in providing all kinds of services should honestly inform their customers of the service. Of course, necessary laws and regulations should be adopted and enforced to ensure a trust worthy economic and social environment.

解析     从结构上看,本文对提纲做了适当调整,分为三段而不是两段。第一段采用了先总后分再总的写作方法,段首对图画做出总体评价,进而描写图画,在段末指出:这幅画实际并不可笑,而是讽刺了社会上非常普遍的承诺分内之事现象。这句话也是文章的中心所在。第二段段首承接上段,指出这种现象不容忽视,进而举例说明其普遍性并与第一段呼应,指出这些现象都是在承诺本职所在的工作。第三段段首为主体句,段落中从两个方面提出改变这种现象的措施,段尾进行总结,与段首形成呼应。
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