Overly Protected Child 被过度保护的孩子 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should 1)describe the d

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问题 Overly Protected Child
被过度保护的孩子
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
1)describe the drawing briefly,
2)explain its intended meaning, and
3)give your comments.

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答案 In the picture, a little boy is walking pompously in the rain. His mother is holding an umbrella for him. Likewise, his father is holding an umbrella for his mother and his grandmother for his father. Not far away, his grandfather, with an umbrella in hand, is rushing to catch up with his grandmother. Under the picture, the caption reads: "Many protective umbrellas for a kid". This picture draws readers’attention to parents’ and grandparents’ overprotection to wards their kids and the harm it may cause. In my opinion, parents should leave some room for their kids to take care of themselves. Although it is quite understandable that parents want their kids to be safe and sound, it is not beneficial to the growth and development of their kids. Kids are like flowers that need to experience the wind and rain to get stronger and survive subsequent storms. If parents build a carefree and trouble-free fantasy world for their children, these children will not grow into independent individuals who are capable of handling various difficulties in life. In short, it is advisable that parents know the impor tance of letting go and launching their kids on the journey to independence. Anyway, the outside world is the destination for kids when they grow up.

解析     这幅图片刻画了四个大人为一个小孩打伞的情景。从图解看出,作者对这种过分保护孩子的行为提出异议。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段描绘图片,指出父母的过度保护会给孩子带来危害。
    第二段提出个人看法:父母应该培养孩子的独立性。通过比喻花朵要经历风雨,强调孩子需要磨练。如果父母事事代办,孩子只会生活在虚幻中,长大后难以应对现实世界的各种考验。
    第三段总结全文:父母应该懂得放手,引导孩子踏上独立自主的道路。
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