Parents’ Expectation, Children’s Burden 父母的期望,孩子的负担 Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you sho

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问题 Parents’ Expectation, Children’s Burden
父母的期望,孩子的负担
Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the drawing. In your essay, you should
1)describe the drawing briefly,
2)interpret its intended meaning, and
3)give your comments.

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答案 In the picture, a son and a father are featured. Each of them is burdened by one large sack. The son’s bag is representation of subjects he takes at school: Chinese, English, mathematics, etc., while the father’s is indicative of his expectations of his son: kid’s future, parents’ dreams, and upward comparison with others. We can imply from the picture that the son and the father are leading an exhausting life, weighted down with a heavy study load and high expectations respectively. One factor leading to this, as is shown in the picture, is the college entrance examination. In my opinion, we should ease students’ heavy burden of study and that of their parents’ expectations. To begin with, we should not attach too much importance to exams. Students should be given more time to develop their own hobbies, which would be beneficial to their all-round development. In addition, parents should be guided to give up the unnecessary stress. They should understand that they cannot transfer their own unfulfilled ambitions onto their children. In short, less importance attached to exams, as well as less pressure from parents, will let both children and parents enjoy a more relaxing life.

解析     这幅图片刻画了一对父子分别头顶两个麻袋。麻袋所装的内容不同,而图的右下方有“高考”二字。可见图片所反映的是在高考的压力下,父子两代人的负担都很大。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,文章内容可安排如下:
    第一段简要描绘图片。并指出图片的意图:高考给孩子和父母都造成了沉重的压力。
    第二段提出个人看法:从两方面人手减负。一是我们应该为孩子的学业减负。二是应设法引导家长,让他们放下过多的包袱。
    第三段总结全文。
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