Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then inter

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问题     Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it.

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答案 This drawing shows us a funny but realistic situation, a young boy who wears a thick pair of glasses is sifting on o tall chair, reading a thick book hard. Other two books are lain on the tall desk in front of him. The poor boy seems to become dizzy from his continuous hard working without notice of his shoes falling down to the floor. His mother is squatting on his left to help him put on the dropped shoes and said with a satisfied smile, "My son, you do not need to do anything but study hard to become a VIP one day in the future." At the same time, his father is standing on his right with a plate, feeding him with a spoon patiently. From the picture, we can tell that nowadays many students study with an incorrect purpose. Their parents expect them to study for money and fame instead of gaining knowledge. They are frequently forced to follow their parents’ words and told to care about nothing except for study, in this way, their parents deprive them of the opportunities to deal with problems independently and thus such children tend to become lazy and incapable of coping with practical problems. Their worldview has been twisted and in most cases, they are frail and cannot withstand failure bravely. So in my point of view, parents should not expect too much of their children and should not be so practical and money-oriented. Instead they should help their children form a correct attitude towards study and give them helpful instructions to real success.

解析     本文是图画式现象解释型作文。图中一个戴眼睛的男孩坐在椅子上看书,桌上摆着厚厚的书。他的妈妈正给他穿掉下的鞋子,而他爸爸站在一侧,正拿着勺子喂他吃东西。他妈妈对他说:"啥也别干,只管读书,将来当大官"。这幅图画反映了目前家长普遍的望子成龙的心态,但是他们灌输给孩子错误的学习观念——为了钱和权力而读书。他们不让孩子做任何事情,这实际上是剥夺了孩子独立处理事情的能力,其结果是导致孩子心理脆弱,不能面对挫折,这对孩子的成长发育极为不利。
    因此家长首先要有正确的观念,这样才能帮助孩子形成正确的世界观,让孩子具有正确的学习观,这样才能帮助孩子取得真正意义上的成功。本文结构安排如下,首先解释图画所给出信息,并就其涵义进行深入分析,最后提出作者自己的观点,做到语义衔接顺畅,自然得出结论。
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