On College Students’ Driving to Campus 小议学生开车上学 A.Title: On College Students’ Driving to Campus B.Word limit: 160-200 words (not

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问题 On College Students’ Driving to Campus
小议学生开车上学
A.Title: On College Students’ Driving to Campus
B.Word limit: 160-200 words (not including the given opening sentence)
C.Your composition should be based on the OUTLINE below and should start with the given opening sentence: "Along with their growing prevalence, private cars have penetrated into a wealth of citizens’ lives."
OUTLINE:
1.Present situation
2.People’s concerns
3.My opinion

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答案 Along with their growing prevalence, private cars have penetrated into a wealth of citizens’ lives. Even some college students today drive their own cars to campus. This phenomenon has aroused great social concerns. Many people believe that driving cars to campus may have quite some bad influences on campus. In the first place, students’ soaring ownership of cars may put tremendous pressure on the limited capacity of campus roads, which were originally designed mostly for walk and bicycles. Additionally, private cars may burden the campus with unnecessary costs of possible environment maintenance, noise control, etc. With more cars on the roads, more concerns are raised on the security of the students. Finally, once driving private cars becomes a trend among students, it might bring in more peer pressures. Students might unconsciously compare with each other. And those who cannot afford a car might feel inferior or become less confident. From what has been discussed above, I believe college students’ driving to campus should be forbidden. To be more specific, it will be advisable for the universities to reverse this rising trend among students by setting strict regulations.

解析     本文是一篇议论文。讨论大学生开车上学的现象。文章内容可安排如下:
    第一段概述私家车流行,甚至有大学生开车上学的现象,引出话题。
    第二段详述大学生开车上学带来的不良影响:给校园有限的空间带来负担,增加校园维护成本并威胁学生人身安全等。
    第三段提出自己的看法:大学生开车上学这一行为应该被制止。
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